My name is Eddie. I am nine. I go to Makauri School.
I have one sister, and two cats. I love chasing my dog Gizmo.
I play rugby for High School Old Boys, and want to play for the school.
My goal is to write nine sentence in writing.
Friday, 8 June 2018
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You described yourself very well but maybe post something.
ReplyDeleteNice story Eddie. How is your rugby going. How are your animals. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteWhat are your cats names?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Hohepa from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you told me that you had two cats.
I learnt that you love chasing your dog Gizmo.
Maybe you could tell me what the cats names are.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="http://matawaihohepaa.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
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Hohepa
kia ora Eddie,my name is metuisela i go to te hapara school.I heard that you are trying to get better at reading and I know its a little bit hard but the most you try you will get better at reading.when I coulden't read I kept trying than I got better and better so keep trying eddie.
ReplyDeleteHi Eddie, my name is Taine I go to Mangapapa school. I liked the way you describe yourself in your post. I also play rugby for High school old boys. I hope you will achieve your goal keep on trying.
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